How lucky are those who find love when young,
It’s like the stars are aligned somehow,
For them to meet, like their souls are
Old friends catching up on lost
Time striking a new bond.
It makes me wonder
What’s written in
All of these
Stars for
Me
This is a reverse etheree. An etheree is a 10-line poem in which each line follows a syllable count that matches the line number.
Such a beautiful form and such a beautiful poetry. Reminded me of my conversations with stars.❤️💫
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I’ve had many such conversations of my own with the moon. Haha.
Thank you very much 😀
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Celestial bodies are better conversationalist. Introverts like me run away from humans😂
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So true. I read a quote somewhere.. we fall in love with the moon and the stars because they do the simplest thing that many humans are unable to.. they listen. 😀
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That’s the thing. Ah girl you are so wise. Become a good listener 💙
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I love the poem and the thoughts therein. I keep questioning stars too and they remain silent! Sigh!
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Ya, sometimes the silence becomes overwhelming while sometimes the answers lie in the silence 😀
Thank you!
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Listening intently to the silence:)
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So beautiful. We all have that one special person in our lives with whom our soul shares a deep bonding. And this poem perfectly captures that relatable yearning for them.
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Thank you 🙂
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Finding love when young is beautiful, but the universe takes its time for finding someone as magnificent as the cream of the crop.
Good job wrt the poem. Loved it. Keep going 🙂
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Thank you 😁
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This is something many of us ask ourselves at some point in time. Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much 😁
Coming from you it’s high praise.
Love your works!
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Oh, you are welcome. I am but a simple scribbler… this was all you 🙂 I do appreciate your kind words, very much 🙂
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